Minor improvements to wording

[lca-dvswitch.git] / index.html

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@@ -96,12 +96,12 @@
       Now used more widely, often without streaming
     </li>
     <li>
-      Mixing is <em>live</em> - a requirement for streaming, and a way to
-      avoid the need for extensive editing after the event
+      Mixing is <em>live</em> - required for streaming, and avoids the
+      need for extensive editing after the event
     </li>
     <li>
-      Mixing is <em>interactive</em> - a requirement for good coverage of
-      presenters, audience and slides, but very limited in other
+      Mixing is <em>interactive</em> - required for good coverage of
+      presenters, audience and slides; very limited in other
       streaming software
     </li>
   </ul>
@@ -118,7 +118,8 @@
       A general video editor
     </li>
     <li>
-      An audio mixer (but it does implement audio dubbing and level monitoring)
+      An audio mixer - audio functionality is limited to dubbing and
+      level monitoring
     </li>
     <li>
       A complete recording and publishing system
@@ -133,7 +134,7 @@
 <div class="slide">
   <h1>The 'DV' in DVswitch</h1>
   <p>
-    The name refers to the DV formats used by many video cameras:
+    The name refers to the DV format used by many video cameras:
   </p>
   <table>
     <tr>
@@ -246,12 +247,12 @@
 </div>
 
 <div class="slide">
-  <h1>Mixer</h1>
+  <h1>Mixer UI</h1>
   <object data="screenshot-1.png" width="50%"></object>
 </div>
 
 <div class="slide">
-  <h1>Mixer</h1>
+  <h1>Mixer UI, annotated</h1>
   <object data="screenshot-1-annotated.png" width="50%"></object>
 </div>