Applied most changes from review by debian-l10n-english (bug #429444).

diff --git a/debian/control b/debian/control
index 7d75d49a5c2f4ba696c21a1c6b2b1f3e858c8a0f..139a2df561e8e7a46ec3ac65ef5afbe37330d870 100644 (file)
--- a/debian/control
+++ b/debian/control
@@ -20,16 +20,14 @@ Description: keyboard-friendly window manager with tiled windows
  easier. Flexible configuration is possible thanks to Lua, which is
  used as the configuration language.
  .
- There is also support for so-called "floating workspaces" where
+ There is also support for so-called 'floating workspaces' where
  windows are managed the conventional way, so that you can still run
  applications which do not fit very well into Ion's window management
  approach. A pwm3 binary is included which starts Ion with floating
  workspaces as the default, thus replacing the now obsolete PWM window
  manager.
  .
- This is the current development branch of Ion.
- .
- Website: http://iki.fi/tuomov/ion/
+  Homepage: http://iki.fi/tuomov/ion/
 
 Package: ion3-dev
 Section: non-free/devel
@@ -38,7 +36,7 @@ Architecture: all
 Depends: libx11-dev, libsm-dev, lua5.1, gcc (>> 3)
 Description: ion3 development files
  This package contains the files necessary for building extension
- modules to the window manager Ion.
+ modules to the Ion window manager.
 
 Package: ion3-doc
 Section: non-free/doc
@@ -46,6 +44,6 @@ Architecture: all
 Recommends: lynx | www-browser
 Suggests: doc-base, dwww | doc-central | dhelp
 Description: ion3 documentation
- This package contains the document "Configuring and extending Ion3
- with Lua" which explains how to configure and extend the window
- manager Ion.
+ This package contains the document 'Configuring and extending Ion3
+ with Lua' which explains how to configure and extend the Ion window
+ manager.

diff --git a/debian/ion3.templates b/debian/ion3.templates
index 888900399f23a7b1b4a4fb8fa7f9c5e37a51425b..348fe16eaf543da1d53f8b7de874301d1a67bbb8 100644 (file)
--- a/debian/ion3.templates
+++ b/debian/ion3.templates
@@ -1,3 +1,12 @@
+# These templates have been reviewed by the debian-l10n-english
+# team
+#
+# If modifications/additions/rewording are needed, please ask
+# for an advice to debian-l10n-english@lists.debian.org
+#
+# Even minor modifications require translation updates and such
+# changes should be coordinated with translators and reviewers.
+
 Template: ion3/acknowledge-outdated
 Type: boolean
 Default: false
@@ -6,11 +15,12 @@ _Description: Do you understand that this version is not supported by the author
  the latest version released by the author.
  .
  DO NOT send bug reports or questions to the author unless they apply
- to the latest version, available from:
+ to the latest version, available at:
   http://modeemi.fi/~tuomov/ion/download.html
  .
- You should send any bug reports about this package to the Debian bug
- tracking system and any other questions to the Debian maintainer.
+ Otherwise, you should send any bug reports about this package to the
+ Debian bug tracking system and any other questions to the Debian
+ maintainer.
 
 Template: ion3/acknowledge-maybe-outdated
 Type: boolean
@@ -29,6 +39,6 @@ _Description: Do you understand that this version may not be supported by the au
 
 Template: ion3/did-not-acknowledge-outdated
 Type: error
-Description: You did not acknowledge installation of an old version.
+Description: Non-acknowledged installation of an old version
  You must acknowledge that the author does not support old versions
  and should not be contacted about them.