Applied most changes from review by debian-l10n-english (bug #429444).

diff --git a/debian/control b/debian/control
index 7d75d49a5c2f4ba696c21a1c6b2b1f3e858c8a0f..139a2df561e8e7a46ec3ac65ef5afbe37330d870 100644 (file)
--- a/debian/control
+++ b/debian/control
@@ -20,16 +20,14 @@ Description: keyboard-friendly window manager with tiled windows
  easier. Flexible configuration is possible thanks to Lua, which is
  used as the configuration language.
  .
  easier. Flexible configuration is possible thanks to Lua, which is
  used as the configuration language.
  .

- There is also support for so-called "floating workspaces" where
+ There is also support for so-called 'floating workspaces' where

  windows are managed the conventional way, so that you can still run
  applications which do not fit very well into Ion's window management
  approach. A pwm3 binary is included which starts Ion with floating
  workspaces as the default, thus replacing the now obsolete PWM window
  manager.
  .
  windows are managed the conventional way, so that you can still run
  applications which do not fit very well into Ion's window management
  approach. A pwm3 binary is included which starts Ion with floating
  workspaces as the default, thus replacing the now obsolete PWM window
  manager.
  .

- This is the current development branch of Ion.
- .
- Website: http://iki.fi/tuomov/ion/
+  Homepage: http://iki.fi/tuomov/ion/

 
 Package: ion3-dev
 Section: non-free/devel
 
 Package: ion3-dev
 Section: non-free/devel


@@ -38,7 +36,7 @@ Architecture: all
 Depends: libx11-dev, libsm-dev, lua5.1, gcc (>> 3)
 Description: ion3 development files
  This package contains the files necessary for building extension
 Depends: libx11-dev, libsm-dev, lua5.1, gcc (>> 3)
 Description: ion3 development files
  This package contains the files necessary for building extension

- modules to the window manager Ion.
+ modules to the Ion window manager.

 
 Package: ion3-doc
 Section: non-free/doc
 
 Package: ion3-doc
 Section: non-free/doc


@@ -46,6 +44,6 @@ Architecture: all
 Recommends: lynx | www-browser
 Suggests: doc-base, dwww | doc-central | dhelp
 Description: ion3 documentation
 Recommends: lynx | www-browser
 Suggests: doc-base, dwww | doc-central | dhelp
 Description: ion3 documentation

- This package contains the document "Configuring and extending Ion3
- with Lua" which explains how to configure and extend the window
- manager Ion.
+ This package contains the document 'Configuring and extending Ion3
+ with Lua' which explains how to configure and extend the Ion window
+ manager.

diff --git a/debian/ion3.templates b/debian/ion3.templates
index 888900399f23a7b1b4a4fb8fa7f9c5e37a51425b..348fe16eaf543da1d53f8b7de874301d1a67bbb8 100644 (file)
--- a/debian/ion3.templates
+++ b/debian/ion3.templates
@@ -1,3 +1,12 @@
+# These templates have been reviewed by the debian-l10n-english
+# team
+#
+# If modifications/additions/rewording are needed, please ask
+# for an advice to debian-l10n-english@lists.debian.org
+#
+# Even minor modifications require translation updates and such
+# changes should be coordinated with translators and reviewers.
+

 Template: ion3/acknowledge-outdated
 Type: boolean
 Default: false
 Template: ion3/acknowledge-outdated
 Type: boolean
 Default: false


@@ -6,11 +15,12 @@ _Description: Do you understand that this version is not supported by the author
  the latest version released by the author.
  .
  DO NOT send bug reports or questions to the author unless they apply
  the latest version released by the author.
  .
  DO NOT send bug reports or questions to the author unless they apply

- to the latest version, available from:
+ to the latest version, available at:

   http://modeemi.fi/~tuomov/ion/download.html
  .
   http://modeemi.fi/~tuomov/ion/download.html
  .

- You should send any bug reports about this package to the Debian bug
- tracking system and any other questions to the Debian maintainer.
+ Otherwise, you should send any bug reports about this package to the
+ Debian bug tracking system and any other questions to the Debian
+ maintainer.

 
 Template: ion3/acknowledge-maybe-outdated
 Type: boolean
 
 Template: ion3/acknowledge-maybe-outdated
 Type: boolean


@@ -29,6 +39,6 @@ _Description: Do you understand that this version may not be supported by the au
 
 Template: ion3/did-not-acknowledge-outdated
 Type: error
 
 Template: ion3/did-not-acknowledge-outdated
 Type: error

-Description: You did not acknowledge installation of an old version.
+Description: Non-acknowledged installation of an old version

  You must acknowledge that the author does not support old versions
  and should not be contacted about them.
  You must acknowledge that the author does not support old versions
  and should not be contacted about them.