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   <h1>The stable update process (2)</h1>
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   <h1>The stable update process (2)</h1>
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-      Stable branch maintainer sends pending changes to the mailing
-      list, the original authors, etc., for a time-limited period of
-      review and testing
+      Maintainer sends pending changes to mailing list, original
+      authors, etc., for time-limited review and testing

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-         Although the changes have been accepted by Linus, some might
-         not be needed in a stable branch or might not work due to
-         missing dependencies
+         Fix might not be needed in a stable branch, or might not
+         work due to missing dependencies

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-         A fix might have been found to introduce a regression in
-         mainline, so should only be applied to the stable branch
-         along with a second fix for the regression
+         Fix might have been found to introduce a regression in
+         mainline, so must wait until second fix available

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-      All changes that passed review (and maybe some that were
-      added) are applied to the stable branch and the release is
-      tagged
+      Maintainer drops/adds changes based on review, then applies
+      to stable branch and tags release

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-      Greg pushes the tag to kernel.org (possibly after pulling
-      from the other maintainer) which generates tarballs,
-      updates the front page, etc.
+      Greg pushes tag to kernel.org (possibly after pulling from
+      another maintainer) which generates tarballs, updates the front
+      page, etc.

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       Maintainer announces the release, shortly followed by LWN
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       Maintainer announces the release, shortly followed by LWN