From a1d6174ba5fb69b3cd9d45fe39b2af203e54927d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Ben Hutchings <ben@decadent.org.uk>
Date: Sun, 3 Feb 2013 03:54:20 +0100
Subject: [PATCH 1/1] Tighten wording of slide 3 to fit

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 index.html | 26 +++++++++++---------------
 1 file changed, 11 insertions(+), 15 deletions(-)

diff --git a/index.html b/index.html
index c303bf1..afa097f 100644
--- a/index.html
+++ b/index.html
@@ -111,31 +111,27 @@
   <h1>The stable update process (2)</h1>
   <ul>
     <li>
-      Stable branch maintainer sends pending changes to the mailing
-      list, the original authors, etc., for a time-limited period of
-      review and testing
+      Maintainer sends pending changes to mailing list, original
+      authors, etc., for time-limited review and testing
       <ul>
 	<li>
-	  Although the changes have been accepted by Linus, some might
-	  not be needed in a stable branch or might not work due to
-	  missing dependencies
+	  Fix might not be needed in a stable branch, or might not
+	  work due to missing dependencies
 	</li>
 	<li>
-	  A fix might have been found to introduce a regression in
-	  mainline, so should only be applied to the stable branch
-	  along with a second fix for the regression
+	  Fix might have been found to introduce a regression in
+	  mainline, so must wait until second fix available
 	</li>
       </ul>
     </li>
     <li>
-      All changes that passed review (and maybe some that were
-      added) are applied to the stable branch and the release is
-      tagged
+      Maintainer drops/adds changes based on review, then applies
+      to stable branch and tags release
     </li>
     <li>
-      Greg pushes the tag to kernel.org (possibly after pulling
-      from the other maintainer) which generates tarballs,
-      updates the front page, etc.
+      Greg pushes tag to kernel.org (possibly after pulling from
+      another maintainer) which generates tarballs, updates the front
+      page, etc.
     </li>
     <li>
       Maintainer announces the release, shortly followed by LWN
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