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       Now used more widely, often without streaming
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-      Mixing is <em>live</em> - a requirement for streaming, and a way to
-      avoid the need for extensive editing after the event
+      Mixing is <em>live</em> - required for streaming, and avoids the
+      need for extensive editing after the event
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-      Mixing is <em>interactive</em> - a requirement for good coverage of
-      presenters, audience and slides, but very limited in other
+      Mixing is <em>interactive</em> - required for good coverage of
+      presenters, audience and slides; very limited in other
       streaming software
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