From: Ben Hutchings <ben@decadent.org.uk>
Date: Thu, 30 Dec 2010 02:11:25 +0000 (+0000)
Subject: Abbreviate some 'what is...' points to fit
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Abbreviate some 'what is...' points to fit
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diff --git a/index.html b/index.html
index 5f8ad58..1c087b3 100644
--- a/index.html
+++ b/index.html
@@ -96,12 +96,12 @@
       Now used more widely, often without streaming
     </li>
     <li>
-      Mixing is <em>live</em> - a requirement for streaming, and a way to
-      avoid the need for extensive editing after the event
+      Mixing is <em>live</em> - required for streaming, and avoids the
+      need for extensive editing after the event
     </li>
     <li>
-      Mixing is <em>interactive</em> - a requirement for good coverage of
-      presenters, audience and slides, but very limited in other
+      Mixing is <em>interactive</em> - required for good coverage of
+      presenters, audience and slides; very limited in other
       streaming software
     </li>
   </ul>